After reviewing the “Revision Strategy,” I have learned some importants points when doing a revision.
- We need to thave a clear thesis for our essay.
- The point of view have to be clear to readers.
- We have to identified the target audience.
- We have to organize all the ideas.
In my Essay 1, I used this strategies establishing my thesis about feelings of safety at home, and how that can affect healthy and life. I tried to connect with the audience and make them feel my emotions and feelings through my essay. At the same time, I tried to keep all the ideas organized and clear.